Fortnite

Shark Chase

 You were on a tropical beach and getting chased by a shark you could run out or you could stay and pretend like there is nothing there

You can try to be brave and stay in and die or be scared and run out

Next you can be save or you could die then you would be dead and you lose thank you for watching my story

dark stone eye

Here is my story about the dark stone eye it is about finding the dark stone eye but this picture is about a little boy named nathan and his friends he had 3 friends and one day they decided to make a tree house then he made one but it was only for 2 friends so they had turns of sleeping like one sleeps all night and 1 sleeps half night then they keep going on as they eat in morning lunch and dinner

Dark Stone Eye

Here is my story about the dark stone eye it is about finding the dark stone eye but this picture is about a little boy named nathan and his friends he had 3 friends and one day they decided to make a tree house then he made one but it was only for 2 friends so they had turns of sleeping like one sleeps all night and 1 sleeps half night then they keep going on as they eat in morning lunch and dinner

How to Use Dialoge

Focuses for writing this week	Explanation in my own words.
Where do speech marks go
How to put in other punctuation
When to start a new line or when to keep writing
Different words for ‘said’	Asked, replied, responded, yelled, screamed, shouted, mumbled, said, muttered, gasped, panting, chuckled, thought, told, uttered, continued, whispered
Adding adverbs	Responded politely, asked politely, screamed angrily,

EXAMPLES

“Who can I pick on?” asked Miss Ashley.

“Me” replied Timote.

“How was your day?” asked Hope.

“Great, thank you” replied Miss Ashley.

“How was your weekend” asked Dwyane.

“It was good” responded Havea.

If more than one person is talking, you put the reply underneath.

Mary was a beautiful girl who was wearing her long black hair in two plaits. She asked her mum, “can I go to the pools today?”.

“Why do you want to go” mum replied.

“It’s hot and I want to cool off”.

“Fine then”

If it’s only one person, you keep going.

Little red riding hood walked along the dirt path and thought to herself “I’m getting hungry”. She had walked a looooonng way but the thought of warm apple pie when she got to grandma’s house kept her going.

MY GROUP’S EXAMPLE.