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Thursday, July 26, 2018

Fortnite

Shark Chase

 You were on a tropical beach and getting chased by a shark you could run out or you could stay and pretend like there is nothing there
You can try to be brave and stay in and die or be scared and run out

Next you can be save or you could die then you would be dead and you lose thank you for watching my story

dark stone eye




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Here is my story about the dark stone eye it is about finding the dark stone eye but this picture is about a little boy named nathan and his friends he had 3 friends and one day they decided to make a tree house then he made one but it was only for 2 friends so they had turns of sleeping like one sleeps all night and 1 sleeps half night then they keep going on as they eat in morning lunch and dinner

Dark Stone Eye


Image result for dark stone eye Here is my story about the dark stone eye it is about finding the dark stone eye but this picture is about a little boy named nathan and his friends he had 3 friends and one day they decided to make a tree house then he made one but it was only for 2 friends so they had turns of sleeping like one sleeps all night and 1 sleeps half night then they keep going on as they eat in morning lunch and dinner

Sunday, July 1, 2018

How to Use Dialoge


Focuses for writing this week
Explanation in my own words.
Where do speech marks go

How to put in other punctuation

When to start a new line or when to keep writing

Different words for ‘said’
Asked, replied, responded, yelled, screamed, shouted, mumbled, said, muttered, gasped, panting, chuckled, thought, told, uttered, continued, whispered
Adding adverbs
Responded politely, asked politely, screamed angrily,

EXAMPLES
“Who can I pick on?” asked Miss Ashley.
“Me” replied Timote.

“How was your day?” asked Hope.
“Great, thank you” replied Miss Ashley.

“How was your weekend” asked Dwyane.
“It was good” responded Havea.

If more than one person is talking, you put the reply underneath.
Mary was a beautiful girl who was wearing her long black hair in two plaits. She asked her mum, “can I go to the pools today?”.
“Why do you want to go” mum replied.
“It’s hot and I want to cool off”.
“Fine then”

If it’s only one person, you keep going.
Little red riding hood walked along the dirt path and thought to herself “I’m getting hungry”. She had walked a looooonng way but the thought of warm apple pie when she got to grandma’s house kept her going.

MY GROUP’S EXAMPLE.

Wednesday, June 27, 2018

Wednesday, June 20, 2018

Title: Room 7  Co-constructed narrative
Labels: writing


House on fire
Hear sirens going off - firemen are coming
Put the fire out with water hosesImage result for fire house
Smoke is strong
Problem - there might be people inside?!
PS4 is still inside. - valuables
Clothes are inside.
Might be cats or dogs inside

Playing fortnite- little boy poured water on the plug.
Little boy - craig. Blonde hair, 1 metre high, 8 years old, freckles, brown eyes, short curly hair, fortnite t shirt, drinking water, laughed and dropped the cup, or got angry, screamed.


Title
Fire in the house
Introduction
One sunny beautiful Saturday Craig was playing Fornite with his friend Jack. They had been playing all day long.
Orientation
Craig was a 8 year old boy with blonde, curly hair and chocolate brown eyes. He was wearing his favourite turquoise Fornite shirt and seafoam pants. Jack was 9 and had jet black hair and bright blue eyes. The two boys were playing Fornite in the lounge at Craig’s house. The lounge looked like a pigs sty, with stinky socks, pizza boxes and mountain dew cans everywhere.
Problem
Craig was sooo engrossed in his game. He leapt out of the bus, pressed X and landed on one of the houses. Craigs thumbs and fingers were starting to ache from playing for sooo long without a break. Jack thought a glass of water might wake him up, so he went to get his friend a cool glass of icy water. He was just strolling back into the messy lounge, when he heard Craig scream “OHHH YEAH HEADSHOT!”. It gave Jack such a fright that he dropped the glass of water, and “Oh no!” he screamed, it tipped straight onto the electrical plug. Craig sniffs “sniff sniff”, “I can smell smoke, is the oven on?”. Jack yells “THERE’S A FIRE, HELP!”. Craig finally looks up from his game to see that the PS4 caught on fire! Craig thought to himself “Dang it, I was about to win!”. The two boys rushed outside leaving all their valuables behind.
Solution
Jack ran to the neighbours house and asked to borrow Lucy’s phone. “HELP HELP OUR HOUSE IS ON FIRE!”. Craig could hear the sirens of the fire engines getting closer and closer. Jack and Craig tried to comfort each other, but they were panicking so much and couldn’t hear each other over the sirens and blaring smoke alarms. The firetrucks arrived and extinguish the flames in 1 long hour.
Conclusion
The two boys felt depressed. Their game was over, and they didn’t win. And now… their house was destroyed.

Monday, June 11, 2018

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Thursday, March 15, 2018

panmure club

today we went to the panmure club bridge this is the third bridge that they6.




John Williams

Mokoia pa


today we went to mokoia pa it was from the kiwi tamaki who have died from the maori tribes from up north they wanted to kill them so there can be no food no animals and no houses



Monday, March 12, 2018

The arch bridge

This is the bridge i built it is called the arch bridge the arch bridge is a bridge with abutments
at each shaped as a curved arch the arch bridge is really cool check it out

Tuesday, February 27, 2018