Recount Checklist 2018

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Checked by: Terell

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Surface features	Searched	Found	Fixed
Capital letters at the beginning of a sentence	✓
Capital ‘I’	✓
Capital letters for names of places and people	✓	✓	✓
Full stops at the end of a sentence	✓	✓	✓
Speech marks when people are talking	✓
Punctuation - ? ! ; : ‘	✓
Words are written in past tense	✓
Connectives - next, then, afterwards	✓	✓	✓
Interesting and difficult adjectives	✓
Deep features
Introduction has who, what, when, where, why, and how	✓	✓	✓
Conclusion has a reflective statement or says how you felt	✓
Ideas/events in the right order	✓	✓	✓
3 paragraphs	✓
Metaphors and similes	✓	✓	✓
Onomatopoeia, alliteration and/or idiom	✓	✓	✓
Different types of sentences - short, long, compound and complex	✓
One thing (name) did well was… One thing (name) need to work on is…

On monday 17th of september in the morning we did the roll. Then Miss Ashley told us to get into pears and all the furniture was moved away. Then when she told us we were doing yoga  i moaned even though she said it was easy to hard the first one was alright until she made it worse.

I was moaning I do not want to do this but we had to it it was hard I did not understand a single bit of yoga my legs were not made for yoga so we went to the first one.It was hard hard until we got to the end hiria and Vaiola did it fast cause Miss Ashley helped them me and leon were doing well Syriale’ said we were we managed to do the easy ones but the last one we didn't even do cause I raged and leon’ said hurry it's fun then i dropped on the floor then leon was doing it by himself he was doing a Handstand to help him do what he wanted I failed 8 of them with leon 10 of them with leon cause I did .

Then at the end when we failed i think hiria and vaiola won cause miss kept looking at them and helping them after we had to finish up then the rest was done i was relieved after all that hard yoga i passed it some i just lied on the floor and the easy ones i did easily